unbox-able romantic love - in love chic-lit rom-com sentimental heart breaking story-book. keep from me. i see mother and cubs instinctual love the nurturing teat-milk-kind. freedom to be the animal in them. creative. driven. devouring. sculptor to stone cast in bronze. unforgiving. in it ambition yet we forgive for ever and ever those we love. constrictive. free and tender. the lioness cuffs her cubs. stay out of danger. learn pain. be part of the pride. there is no pride in love. would that poetry or music outline its perfection. Shakespeare. a rose - yet it's not a word definable. an emotion unbox-able. it sells. it creates. driven by it. it. it is the reason we are here ©Dawn Collins
rings of the stuff of stars in the night sky we watch explosions nuclear fusion. so pretty out there in the ineffable blackness. our wedding bands ancient as the cosmos material from a supernova how the pressure of our own nebulae. dust of longing. molecules of trust. the glowing of us. how everything we are is all and ever will be a mystical fusion of souls ©Dawn Collins
lovely. "a mystical fusion of souls" one could argue that it's a mystical fission of souls. (he) But about that first poem. I love its shape. How intentional was the shape, or did you write it out longhand and it just flowed onto the page like this?